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Very funny!

Even if the graphics weren't super intensive, it was still so freaking hilarous! Lots of good wholesome randomness was added as well, and it was pure randomness, not just some random crap that somebody found from Google abuse. The funny dancing Hitler stick figures were priceless. And I do have to thank you for having Pikachu make an appearance but not having him killed like I have seen in so many other Flash movies. I do grow so very tired of seeing that.

In all, I thought it was funny and well done. It isn't every day where you come across good and random humor like this.

Awesome job!

Graphics were fantastic, animation was super sleek, and I loved the humor! I'd adore to see more of your Flashes soon, since I loved this one. And yay, Pikachu makes an appearance but doesn't get shot/stabbed/slaughtered/tortured! I highly appreciate that!

All my 5 are belong to you!

Breathtaking.

Amazing animation combined with great graphics and interesting storyline. Music seemed like an odd choice at first, but after awhile, I began to understand why you chose it.

I find the wavy animation very interesting and unique, and I like how you use it in every one of these movies. I'm sure it's a lot of extra work to create that but it does create a nice effect.

Keep up the great work, this movie is surely a job well done.

How could you stoop so low?

Man that was pathetic. How could you even call this a movie? I seriously doubt any of you would like to see something like this made about you if you were to pass away. This is not a joke, and for God’s sake, it’s seriously nothing to be laughed at.

And I’m tired of hearing that same music used again and again in crappy Flashes. To me, its like a warning bell going off to indicate a crappy Flash.

Nice job on getting Turd of the Week. You’ve taken shame to a whole new level…

Okay, but...

I like the graphics and the style, but give each of your characters a mouth rather than bobbing their head. And have them talk with the vocals. I know lip syncing can be a pain but it looks better if you do it. Other than that, the characters are fine and your graphics have a nice style.

On a side note, it was really only a little funny. Really good humor has to be fast, sharp, witty, and definitely unexpected.

This is a good movie to build upon, and if you continue with it and have more stuff happen, I'm sure it can turn out to be great. Good luck with it.

Nickl25 responds:

Reason why the animation was so "poor" was because it was done in just 2 hours on a whim. I really didn't care how in came out as long as I got it done. Thanks for the review tho.

Much Better!

Definitely a nice improvement over last time. Length was good, and it fit the music perfectly. Maybe replace the stick figures in the last picture with detailed faces of people, and have the faces fade out instead. Either way, I like it a lot, and the message is stronger. The last scene was definitely a nice touch, showing the progression of life fit very nicely with the rest of the movie.

Overall, nice job, and I hope you keep working with Flash. You definitely have the potential to become a great Flash artist if you keep going with it.

Good, but...

Holy cow was it short. Your graphics are almost perfect and the animation was very smooth, but why did you stop so soon? I would have loved to see more, you already have the power to make a fantastic movie, just keep going and don't stop there.

The graphics of Paper Mario are excellent, and I would have scored this higher if it was longer.

Gofthick-animation responds:

i had to keep it within 20 - 40 seconds as over 20 artists are doing this, to host anything longer would be a bitch

HOT DAMN!!!

Now this is what Flash should be like. Animation was pure awesomeness, and was super smooth to say the least. Sound was also outstanding, and there wasn't anything that was out of place. I salute you on a job well done!

In all, fantastic job, and I would be thankful if you keep submitting entries to Newgrouds to share your excellent work.

More! More!

That was awesome, well animated with excellent sound quality timed extremely well with the animation in the movie. The graphics were also well done and the animation was ultra-smooth. My only complaint is that I want more! Movie could have been a bit longer but I'm quite satisfied with what I've seen already.

Keep it going, I'd love to see this develop into a full series.

Not the best I've seen...

For one thing, your graphics need serious improvement. I couldn't tell if that was a car or a funny looking bike at the end, and most of the other drawings were pretty crudely drawn. Perhaps using the paintbrush tool for characters and line tool for furnature, buildings and other stright objects might be better than relying on the pencil tool. I know drawing with a mouse can be hard at times but I've seen plenty of good Flash work that used a mouse and still had pretty good looking drawings.

I really didn't understand the storyline either. Some guy leaves Africa and then goes to Atlanta, and then what happens after that? Also, I found it odd to a put a piece of Elton John's "Rocketman" right in the middle of the Flash for 4 seconds for really no good reason.

Your FPS could have definitely been higher as well, since it clearly seems you're running it around 12 when it should be around 20-30 if you want smoother animation. Some of your airplanes and "cars" were running pretty slow and were even skipping at that slow rate.

Make your FPS higher if you're going to have a lot of animation, definitely put in more detail and work on the graphics. If you want something to look like a car, at least look at a picture of a car while you're drawing it. Believe me, it helps. Get some good voiceovers for your characters and you'll be well on your way to making a really good Flash.

FiveStar responds:

ofcourse it wasn't "the best". but, no. i wouldn't believe any shit you say because you don't even have a batting average, while da only flash of yours that's passed is a shitty sprite. the animation was apparently smooth enough to pass and the reason why you didn't understand it because itstead of watching the flash, you were sticking a pencil up your ass.

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